More Feedback

Further feedback, given to me after my second pitch to Turner Duckworth.

I found the feedback from this pitch very helpful. They liked the use of green and said that it helped the message of speed. They thought I should try and bring the feeling of motion into my logo which I totlly agree with.

I liked Martins idea of having no static posters at all because this fits in with the theme perfectly of having a fast, always on the move, postal service. Martin also said that I need to be clearer that things are changing because the Post Office isn’t known for being particularly quick.

Other suggestions were that I change the direction of the arrows and movement as it is coming down at the moment which can be seen as negative so I will experiment with different directions. I will also experiment with type off the page on posters and billboards whilst at the same time, keeping it simple.